“Pillar of Remembrance”

 


I am a pillar of salt,
frozen in place,
looking back on a life
I cannot retrace.

Salt the ground beneath my feet,
cast out for lack of taste,
a barren void of withered seed,
choked by ash and sinful waste.

The heavens pour,
mercy’s rain falls still—
a gift for the righteous
and sinners who will.
Yet I dissolve, grain by grain,
a quiet repentance on this stained plain.

A ring of white on tainted ground,
a monument to what was bound:
A soul once lost, now breaking apart,
yearning for grace,
a softened heart.

Salt without savor,
a pillar turned black,
a fleeting reminder—
there is no way back.

Yet as I crumble,
a voice calls out,
“Come home, My child,
though the storms may shout.”

And so I dissolve,
not in despair,
but in hope of rebirth
through mercy’s care.

2 responses to ““Pillar of Remembrance””

  1. Don’t quit just before the miracle. Beautifully done.

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    1. Thank you, didn’t see this comment and one other as it was moved to spam for whatever reason. I’m still very new to WordPress and trying to learn all the subtleties. Appreciate you, and your comments, encouragement.

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