Surrender

Daily writing prompt
What experiences in life helped you grow the most?


Through the Potter’s Hands

I have been poor, I have been rich,
I have held love, and I have watched it slip.
I have known life, and I have met loss,
Children close, then distant—
a breath, a reach, a fading echo.

These are the moments that have shaped me,
some I recall with clarity,
others still whisper their lessons in the quiet.
Good or bad—no matter,
the vessel is still turning,
the hands of the Maker still pressing, still forming.

“We are the clay, You are the Potter.”
The spinning, I have learned—
the rise, the fall, the breaking, the mending.
The speed is relentless, the dents unavoidable,
but the shape is not mine to determine.
Only mine to endure, to trust,
to yield to the hands that know better than my own.

At times, I fought against the wheel,
clenching, grasping, straining—
only to find my grip was the very thing
that kept me from seeing.
For when I step back,
when I loosen my hold,
I glimpse the pattern in the dust,
the beauty in the breaking,
the purpose in the press of His fingers.

We never truly arrive.
We move forward, we fall back,
or we stand still, waiting for sight.
But in the waiting, there is learning.
And in the learning, there is life.
And life is seen through the lens we choose.

Some days, the lens is clouded,
some days, it shifts—
but if I step back, if I surrender,
perhaps I will see
what was there all along.


7 responses to “Surrender”

  1. In the waiting there is learning, in the learning there is life, Wonderfully written! Bravo

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  2. Most lessons are actually learned during the journey.

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  3. Perspective resonates 🌼

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  4. You know what I just realized, I wrote my poem titled Surrender and posted it today right, and in the back of my mind I knew I had recently saw the same title somewhere. Then today I came here to your page and Boom! I saw it here, it was you. Sorry to steal your title accidently.

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    1. Too funny. Earlier I read your Forever Young write and I was going to reply with something from my own post with the same title last month. No worries I guess great minds think alike. https://2b-grey.com/2025/02/12/forever-young/

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      1. Just read it and it was wonderful just as I expected it would be. Your right great minds think alike, I say humbly as I am in good company😏🙏🏻

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