Crescendo of a Daydream


Home from a long day, I turn on Vivaldi’s Four Seasons and let my mind slip free from the shackles of routine. I drift into the music, becoming part of it, letting it steer my thoughts. It builds a world through one voice and many—instruments weaving together, tempos shifting, crescendos rising, then resting, only to surge into forte. The notes introduce characters; they speak to one another—conversations unfold, layering into a unison of races, languages, and tonalities. A picture emerges, vivid and alive. My senses sharpen; it feels real. I can touch it, then erase it, breathing it all in as I inhale the sound. Here’s where it takes me:

Ripples spread like drops on water,
outstretched, they brush against you.
A basket woven with ribbon ends,
notes leap from the page—
a single needle, a thread of sound,
dancing.

A pixie skates across a pond,
gliding where an old woman—
crooked, bent—gathers herself.
Her leather-worn face, dark brown,
holds blue eyes,
mirrors of sky and cloud,
a whispered secret.

Night falls dark,
spies linger in the shadows,
anticipation hums—
an argument unfolds,
a song locked in time.
Solo, then quartet,
“Your Honor,”
a lawyer’s case,
a defendant’s plea—
a storm brews.

Thunder cracks,
rolling hills tremble,
wheat fields sway as one.
Speed builds,
a zoom outward—
countryside, then country,
the world spins below,
a globe cradled in space.

The sun blazes,
planets orbit,
an embryo pulses within a world.
A black hole bends time,
a plane of existence warps—
a hole in one.

Green grass stretches,
white golf shoes gleam,
lemonade cools the air.
Daisy Buchanan drifts by,
money and nouveau riche,
across the bay,
a green light glows.

New York rises—
Lady Freedom lifts her torch,
Wall Street hums,
the Midwest churns,
Industrial Revolution fades to silicon.
Cupertino gleams,
a post liked,
then—turn it off.

Blackness falls,
pull the cord,
silence.

Then the music stops. I’m alone again, on the couch, listening now to Verdi and Aida.


7 responses to “Crescendo of a Daydream”

  1. Mmh. Never thought about the Four Seasons that way. I used to play them, transcribed them for my instrument, all but the cadenzas, which, of course, are improvised, up to a point. Take care!

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  2. Beautifully written.

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    1. Most kind. Thank you

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  3. Well done for posting

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  4. I felt as if you took me along the pattern of your thoughts as you allowed the music to overtake you. I really enjoyed it.

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    1. Thanks Violet I missed this comment, yesterday. Glad you got to come along for the ride!

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  5. I’ll never listen to it again without the feeling of admiration for your art here. Just one after the other, you create images so vivid, so potent, they’re as portals into your world. My God, you are blessed. Born to write.

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