Trip’n

Daily writing prompt
What makes you laugh?


Struttin’ Your Stuff
You’re struttin’ your stride,
threads loud and bright,
pants huggin’ tight,
feelin’ just right.
Shirt’s a snug tease,
assets in view,
glidin’ with ease,
king of the crew.

Think John Travolta,
Stayin’ Alive on blast,
(beat thumps—boom, you’re fast),
head bobbin’ side to side,
back and forth, so fly,
every eye’s glued,
you’re the guy.

Boom, boom,
chakka, chakka,
strut’s in full swing,
you’re owning everything—
then your big toe-tip
snags a root-jacked ledge,
and… whoa!
Screech! Vinyl’s dead on edge.

Slow-mo hits,
a kindness peers from tele-lines,
cold sweat, hot flush,
face twists—no love.
That 33 RPM cool?
Spins back in reverse,
suave’s gone, man,
you’re a glorious curse.

Pants too tight—rip—seams cry,
shirt flaps free, untucked sky,
hair, once slick, now a wild fray,
Fred Astaire, drunk, in disarray.

Dude, I’m dyin’—
that clown nearly ate it,
lunch lost, Coke sprays,
I can’t take it.
Not evil, I swear,
no murder in my glee,
I’ve tripped tons,
fed laughs for free.

They’re fine, just a stumble,
a quick snort, no fall,
me? Next in line—
my shoe’s the call.
Peek and giggle,
it’s all fair game,
murder on my knees,
eatin’ crow, same shame.


5 responses to “Trip’n”

  1. Not even gonna lie, I would first make sure you were ok, and then die laughing. Cause been there done that. I have actually tripped over air.

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  2. I really enjoyed this piece. The rhythm, the imagery, and the whole arc from confidence to collision—it’s funny, yes, but also deeply human. The Fred Astaire line caught me off guard in the best way. It reminded me how often we’re all just a breath away from unraveling—and how grace (and a good laugh) meets us right there.

    I’m an art teacher and a writer slowly working on a book about living from the inside out—learning to abide more than strive. Your writing struck a chord with that. Just wanted to say thanks for sharing it.

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    1. A most sincere thank you. I’m smiling ear to ear, glad we connected for a moment in the plane of time called a ‘moment of fun’ Happy writing!

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  3. I am sorry but I will be the one that busts out laughing if someone (especially someone that is convinced they are cool) stumbles or falls. Yep, I am immediately 12 years old all over again…. great write1

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    1. Right? Is that wrong? Totally infantile, but right there with you.

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